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A review by itsjusttrish
Knot the Right Omega by Violet Coltair
Did not finish book. Stopped at 3%.
An editor really really needed to get a hold of this. I can't even make it past the first chapter.. LONG LONG paragraphs and robotic like speaking between characters. Almost ever sentence ended in an !
Ex: “Actually, they said they didn’t think they were the right fit for me. But it’s okay, there are always more packs out there! (No ending quotation mark)
“Oh Bella! What happened? It’s not okay! They should have broken it off sooner if they felt that way!”
“I’m fine, really Piper! Anyway, I want to know how your trip went!”
Liked the premise but I can't force myself to read.
Ex: “Actually, they said they didn’t think they were the right fit for me. But it’s okay, there are always more packs out there! (No ending quotation mark)
“Oh Bella! What happened? It’s not okay! They should have broken it off sooner if they felt that way!”
“I’m fine, really Piper! Anyway, I want to know how your trip went!”
Liked the premise but I can't force myself to read.