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A review by mangomerle
Frey by Melissa Wright

2.0

Frustrating read. Commas all over the place. Awkwardly composed sentences and paragraphs. Solid story concept, but builds extremely slowly. Told completely in main character's pov, but would have been a much more enjoyable read if the reader weren't kept completely in the dark about goings on and more development of supporting characters would have been really great. Was a nice, easy read for juvenile literature, but not compelling enough to make me want to read further installments of the story.