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A review by jamietherebelliousreader
Before You Break by Parker Williams, K.C. Wells
2.0
2 stars. Boring. Very, very boring.
This was a buddy read and I was so excited to get to it but this just didn’t deliver. How do you ruin a book like this? It should be damn near impossible. I wanted great characters and smut. I got the smut but the characters were awful.
I didn’t like Ellis at all. He was childish and annoying. Wayne was no better. I like dominant characters, but I didn’t like that he pretty much bullied Ellis into the lifestyle. He would be against doing something and instead of talking it out with him, Wayne would just make him do it anyways and that’s not okay to me.
I also didn’t really like the writing. It was very amateurish and didn’t flow well to me. This book felt too long even though it’s not. A lot of the chapters were fillers and could’ve easily been removed from the book.
Overall, this was a dud and I’m not sure if I will be continuing on with this series.
This was a buddy read and I was so excited to get to it but this just didn’t deliver. How do you ruin a book like this? It should be damn near impossible. I wanted great characters and smut. I got the smut but the characters were awful.
I didn’t like Ellis at all. He was childish and annoying. Wayne was no better. I like dominant characters, but I didn’t like that he pretty much bullied Ellis into the lifestyle. He would be against doing something and instead of talking it out with him, Wayne would just make him do it anyways and that’s not okay to me.
I also didn’t really like the writing. It was very amateurish and didn’t flow well to me. This book felt too long even though it’s not. A lot of the chapters were fillers and could’ve easily been removed from the book.
Overall, this was a dud and I’m not sure if I will be continuing on with this series.