kate_deeds 's review for:

Those Two Words by Ronnie Mathews

3.0

slow-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Yes

Loveable characters: Yes

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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Story: 7.5/10

Spice: 2/5 

Spice Hierarchy: Open Door

Jo and Patrick were childhood best friends turned almost lovers.  But just as they were about to be more, life had other plans.  Now six years later, Jo is back in Sutton Bay and working with Patrick to help save their families’ co-owned restaurant.  

I liked this story.  For a debut it was solid.  The middle did drag on for me and I found myself losing interest at times.  If it had been a little shorter I think it would have been a solid 4 star for me.  There are some plot points that I think could have been stronger (saving the restaurant).  I did like seeing strong co-parenting happening between the MMC and his daughter’s mother.  Patrick was so patient with Joanna as she navigated being back in Sutton Bay and all the memories that brought with it.