lmdotcom 's review for:

The Age Of Scorpius by Audra Winter

adventurous medium-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Complicated

Loveable characters: No

Diverse cast of characters: Complicated

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 Haphazard sentences strung together passionately to bring together a passionate attempt at a book. You can feel the drive the author has, however, there is a lack of grounding and essential storytelling elements such as a solid setting and a resonant, comprehensible voice. The characters and world feel incredibly weak, but what was most glaring was the poor grammar, typos, never-ending sentences, half-baked conceptions of magic and in-world social constructs.