A review by annick
When the Viscount Wanted Me by Lydia Lloyd

adventurous lighthearted reflective slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.25

I really wanted to like this book. I like the author’s onstage posts about Historical romance novels. 

But this drags because there is too much of the narrative allocated to describing the inner thoughts of the main characters. 

I like spice but there was so much that the frisson was lost by the speed and scale of the sex scenes.  Some scenes weren’t engaging and I skimmed over. 

I wanted more banter and humour. 

I wanted less melodrama with the miscommunications and the off-scale persistent attentions from the rejected Hartley

The ebook had several typos of wrong pronouns. I don’t mind this. 

The author has a phd in 19th century british lit but she makes a few odd choices. The reference to a performance of Ovid seemed poorly written when its more usual to refer to the title of a writer’s work rather than the writer. Why not mention which poem/work of Ovid ? 

I question some anachronistic references to waltz’s and white wedding dresses. I think those come in the 1830s or 40s. 

These are minor issues but they added to my broader frustrations with the plot, pacing, narrative and dialogue.  

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