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aster1123 's review for:
The Third to Die
by Allison Brennan
I don't know if this is worse than her other books or if my memory of her other books is wrong. I was looking forward to this book and new series but it fell short for me.
I know that the first book setting up a series might be a little awkward as the series finds its feet, but this felt sloppy and lazy in its storytelling. Lots of repetition so the reader doesn't miss the 'super important details' and I didn't actually feel any chemistry between the MCs. The hesitation and wariness in the beginning felt real to me (and for the record I really liked both MCs as characters) but when that suddenly flipped to lust without warning, it didn't feel natural.
I don't know if I'll read the rest.
I know that the first book setting up a series might be a little awkward as the series finds its feet, but this felt sloppy and lazy in its storytelling. Lots of repetition so the reader doesn't miss the 'super important details' and I didn't actually feel any chemistry between the MCs. The hesitation and wariness in the beginning felt real to me (and for the record I really liked both MCs as characters) but when that suddenly flipped to lust without warning, it didn't feel natural.
I don't know if I'll read the rest.