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A review by lolly460
Mr. X by Clarissa Wild
2.0
Jay is a stripper and one day she takes a man to a hotel room. Suddenly a man comes into the room and shoots the other man. That is where all hell breaks loose. I don’t want to say any more because I don’t want to ruin the book for you. Even though it was pretty bad.
Oh dear, where do I start. I have read a lot of kinky stuff but I have to say this book was flirting with my limit to what I can stand to read. It wasn't the sex that had me going "wow" but it was the language. Let me give an example "Beg me to come because you are a filthy girl. You're a whore, and you desire my cum so badly... don't you?" even as I am writing this I get the chills. I mean that is just offensive. You don't talk like that to the woman you love. Please understand me. I don't mind dirty talk. I think it's great but calling her a whore that is just plain wrong. I didn’t like Mr.xs dirty talk and I didn't like him. He didn’t make sense to me. He hated her I get that but being so cruel, that is not right. I didn’t like Jay either. She had a sad life but she could have made something of herself instead she threw her life away. I think that is very sad.
The writing could have been better, as I said; better, dirty talk and the author could have done more to make me like her characters better. She could have used less sex and more character building. Let them grow. I am sorry to say that this book was a disappointment to me
Oh dear, where do I start. I have read a lot of kinky stuff but I have to say this book was flirting with my limit to what I can stand to read. It wasn't the sex that had me going "wow" but it was the language. Let me give an example "Beg me to come because you are a filthy girl. You're a whore, and you desire my cum so badly... don't you?" even as I am writing this I get the chills. I mean that is just offensive. You don't talk like that to the woman you love. Please understand me. I don't mind dirty talk. I think it's great but calling her a whore that is just plain wrong. I didn’t like Mr.xs dirty talk and I didn't like him. He didn’t make sense to me. He hated her I get that but being so cruel, that is not right. I didn’t like Jay either. She had a sad life but she could have made something of herself instead she threw her life away. I think that is very sad.
The writing could have been better, as I said; better, dirty talk and the author could have done more to make me like her characters better. She could have used less sex and more character building. Let them grow. I am sorry to say that this book was a disappointment to me