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A review by imaginejolls
Den of Vipers by K.A. Knight
Did not finish book. Stopped at 28%.
The writing style is awkward. Too many times, the author links two unrelated sentences by adding a comma between them, instead of opting for much more logical options such as a period or even a semi-colon. The flow of the sentences ends up stilted.
And the pacing of the book is very rushed and ended up taking me out of the story too much. How am I supposed to believe the fierce main character who beats up 4 grown men with her trusty baseball bat just rolls over for these psychopaths and goes from "I'm going to ruin their lives and kill them" to "I'm going to fuck them" in the span of like 36 hours?
And the pacing of the book is very rushed and ended up taking me out of the story too much. How am I supposed to believe the fierce main character who beats up 4 grown men with her trusty baseball bat just rolls over for these psychopaths and goes from "I'm going to ruin their lives and kill them" to "I'm going to fuck them" in the span of like 36 hours?