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A review by amys_reading_again
The Forward Line by K.G. Erin
4.0
π 4β
π 15/12/24 - 18/12/24
κ§π΄π πππππ πππ ππππππ, πππ πππππ, πππ ππππππ. πΎπππ π πππππππππ ππ πππππππ πππ ππππ πππ ππππππ ππππππππ, ππππππππππ ππππ π πππππ ππππ πππππ.κ§
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α΄κ°α΄α΄Κ α΄Κα΄ α΄‘α΄α΄α΄Ι΄κ± Κα΄α΄α΄α΄Κ α΄α΄α΄α΄ Ιͺκ± α΄ Ιͺκ±Κα΄Ι΄α΄ α΄α΄ , α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄ Ιͺκ± ΙͺΙ΄ α΄ α΄Ι΄Ι’α΄Κ α΄κ° Κα΄κ±ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ Κα΄Κ κ±α΄Κα΄Κα΄Κκ±ΚΙͺα΄ α΄Ι΄α΄ κ°α΄α΄ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ Κα΄α΄ ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄Ι΄κ±κ°α΄Κ κ±α΄Κα΄α΄Κκ±. α΄α΄ α΄ ΙͺΙ΄α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄α΄ α΄Κα΄ κ°α΄α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄α΄ κ±Κα΄ Ιͺκ± Κα΄κ±ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ Κα΄Κ Κα΄α΄α΄ α΄κ± α΄‘α΄ΚΚ, κ±Κα΄ κ°α΄α΄Κκ± κ±Κα΄ Κα΄κ± Ι΄α΄α΄ΚΙͺΙ΄Ι’ α΄α΄ Κα΄κ±α΄ ΚΚ α΄κ±α΄ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ α΄α΄ α΄α΄ΙͺΙ΄ α΄Κα΄ α΄α΄Ι΄κ± α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄κ± α΄ Κα΄α΄Κα΄α΄α΄α΄α΄Ι΄α΄ κ°α΄Κ α΄Ι΄ ΙͺΙ΄α΄α΄Κα΄α΄ α΄Κα΄Κα΄Κ. α΄Κα΄Κα΄α΄Ι’Κ α΄Κα΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄ΙͺΙ΄ α΄κ° α΄Κα΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄α΄ΚΚα΄α΄ Ιͺκ± Ι΄α΄α΄ Κα΄α΄α΄Κ α΄Κα΄α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄ α΄ α΄α΄Ιͺκ±Ιͺα΄Ι΄, α΄α΄Ι΄α΄α΄ΚΙ΄α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄α΄α΄ Κα΄α΄‘ α΄ΚΙͺκ± α΄α΄Κ α΄κ°κ°α΄α΄α΄ ΚΙͺκ± κ°ΙͺΙ΄α΄Κ Κα΄α΄Κ α΄α΄ κ±α΄Κα΄α΄Κ, Κα΄ Ιͺκ± α΄α΄ α΄Ι΄ Κα΄κ±κ± Κα΄α΄α΄Κ α΄‘Κα΄Ι΄ ΚΙͺκ± α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄κ±, α΄Ι΄α΄ Κα΄α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄κ±, α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄Ι΄α΄ κ±Κα΄α΄‘Ι΄ ΙͺΙ΄α΄ Ιͺα΄α΄ Κα΄Κ α΄α΄ α΄α΄α΄ α΄ ΙͺΙ΄. α΄κ± α΄α΄α΄Κα΄α΄α΄Ιͺα΄Ι΄ Ι’Κα΄α΄‘κ± Κα΄α΄α΄‘α΄α΄Ι΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄, α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄Ι΄α΄ κ±Κα΄α΄‘Ι΄, α΄α΄ΚΚα΄α΄ α΄‘α΄ΚΙ΄κ± α΄Κα΄α΄ α΄ΚΚ α΄Κα΄α΄ Ιͺα΄ α΄‘ΙͺΚΚ α΄ΚΚ α΄Ι΄α΄ ΙͺΙ΄ α΄α΄α΄Κκ± α΄Ι΄α΄ Κα΄ΙͺΙ΄ α΄Κα΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄κ± α΄Κα΄Ι΄α΄α΄κ± α΄κ° α΄‘ΙͺΙ΄Ι΄ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ α΄Κα΄ α΄Κα΄α΄α΄Ιͺα΄Ι΄κ±ΚΙͺα΄. Κα΄α΄‘α΄α΄ α΄Κ, ΚΚ α΄Κα΄ α΄Ι΄α΄ α΄κ° α΄Κα΄ κ±α΄α΄κ±α΄Ι΄, α΄α΄ α΄Ι΄ Κα΄ α΄α΄Ι΄Ι΄α΄α΄ α΄ α΄Ι΄Κ α΄Κα΄ κ°α΄α΄ΚΙͺΙ΄Ι’κ± Κα΄ Κα΄κ± κ°α΄Κ α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄, α΄κ± α΄Κα΄Κ Ι΄α΄α΄ ΙͺΙ’α΄α΄α΄ α΄ 4 α΄‘α΄Κ Κα΄Κα΄α΄Ιͺα΄Ι΄κ±ΚΙͺα΄.
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The Good
β I loved the communication and the gained consent in the spicy scenes. Hearing Tatum tell them exactly what she wants and how she wants it was π₯΅π₯΅π₯΅.
β I liked how all the characters were their own person, with a clear difference in personalities, how they think and what they want. The male characters relationship between each other helps to strengthen the relationship with Tatum, and I was so glad when finally Callum joined the relationship.
The Bad
βSome parts of the storyline felt rushed, and other parts felt like they had been introduced but never fully developed. I would have also loved to have delved more into why Callum was a control freak, why Jace was a Dom and why Shawn needed praise. And why was the MM spice fade to black, there was such a set up for it and I was ready for it, and then nothing.
βThere are grammatical errors all through this, and it could have done with another couple of rounds of editing. It wasn't so bad that it took me out the story, but there are enough that I was noticing them.
TROPES
β«Έ Why Choose MMFM
β«Έ Hockey Romance
β«Έ Collage Romance
β«Έ LGBT
β«Έ Multiple POV
β«Έ Praise
β«Έ Forced Proximity
TWs
β«Έ Sexism / Misogyny
β«Έ Homophobia
π 15/12/24 - 18/12/24
κ§π΄π πππππ πππ ππππππ, πππ πππππ, πππ ππππππ. πΎπππ π πππππππππ ππ πππππππ πππ ππππ πππ ππππππ ππππππππ, ππππππππππ ππππ π πππππ ππππ πππππ.κ§
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α΄κ°α΄α΄Κ α΄Κα΄ α΄‘α΄α΄α΄Ι΄κ± Κα΄α΄α΄α΄Κ α΄α΄α΄α΄ Ιͺκ± α΄ Ιͺκ±Κα΄Ι΄α΄ α΄α΄ , α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄ Ιͺκ± ΙͺΙ΄ α΄ α΄Ι΄Ι’α΄Κ α΄κ° Κα΄κ±ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ Κα΄Κ κ±α΄Κα΄Κα΄Κκ±ΚΙͺα΄ α΄Ι΄α΄ κ°α΄α΄ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ Κα΄α΄ ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄Ι΄κ±κ°α΄Κ κ±α΄Κα΄α΄Κκ±. α΄α΄ α΄ ΙͺΙ΄α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄α΄ α΄Κα΄ κ°α΄α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄α΄ κ±Κα΄ Ιͺκ± Κα΄κ±ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ Κα΄Κ Κα΄α΄α΄ α΄κ± α΄‘α΄ΚΚ, κ±Κα΄ κ°α΄α΄Κκ± κ±Κα΄ Κα΄κ± Ι΄α΄α΄ΚΙͺΙ΄Ι’ α΄α΄ Κα΄κ±α΄ ΚΚ α΄κ±α΄ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ α΄α΄ α΄α΄ΙͺΙ΄ α΄Κα΄ α΄α΄Ι΄κ± α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄κ± α΄ Κα΄α΄Κα΄α΄α΄α΄α΄Ι΄α΄ κ°α΄Κ α΄Ι΄ ΙͺΙ΄α΄α΄Κα΄α΄ α΄Κα΄Κα΄Κ. α΄Κα΄Κα΄α΄Ι’Κ α΄Κα΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄ΙͺΙ΄ α΄κ° α΄Κα΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄α΄ΚΚα΄α΄ Ιͺκ± Ι΄α΄α΄ Κα΄α΄α΄Κ α΄Κα΄α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄ α΄ α΄α΄Ιͺκ±Ιͺα΄Ι΄, α΄α΄Ι΄α΄α΄ΚΙ΄α΄α΄ α΄Κα΄α΄α΄ Κα΄α΄‘ α΄ΚΙͺκ± α΄α΄Κ α΄κ°κ°α΄α΄α΄ ΚΙͺκ± κ°ΙͺΙ΄α΄Κ Κα΄α΄Κ α΄α΄ κ±α΄Κα΄α΄Κ, Κα΄ Ιͺκ± α΄α΄ α΄Ι΄ Κα΄κ±κ± Κα΄α΄α΄Κ α΄‘Κα΄Ι΄ ΚΙͺκ± α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄κ±, α΄Ι΄α΄ Κα΄α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄κ±, α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄Ι΄α΄ κ±Κα΄α΄‘Ι΄ ΙͺΙ΄α΄ Ιͺα΄α΄ Κα΄Κ α΄α΄ α΄α΄α΄ α΄ ΙͺΙ΄. α΄κ± α΄α΄α΄Κα΄α΄α΄Ιͺα΄Ι΄ Ι’Κα΄α΄‘κ± Κα΄α΄α΄‘α΄α΄Ι΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄, α΄α΄α΄α΄ α΄Ι΄α΄ κ±Κα΄α΄‘Ι΄, α΄α΄ΚΚα΄α΄ α΄‘α΄ΚΙ΄κ± α΄Κα΄α΄ α΄ΚΚ α΄Κα΄α΄ Ιͺα΄ α΄‘ΙͺΚΚ α΄ΚΚ α΄Ι΄α΄ ΙͺΙ΄ α΄α΄α΄Κκ± α΄Ι΄α΄ Κα΄ΙͺΙ΄ α΄Κα΄ α΄α΄α΄α΄κ± α΄Κα΄Ι΄α΄α΄κ± α΄κ° α΄‘ΙͺΙ΄Ι΄ΙͺΙ΄Ι’ α΄Κα΄ α΄Κα΄α΄α΄Ιͺα΄Ι΄κ±ΚΙͺα΄. Κα΄α΄‘α΄α΄ α΄Κ, ΚΚ α΄Κα΄ α΄Ι΄α΄ α΄κ° α΄Κα΄ κ±α΄α΄κ±α΄Ι΄, α΄α΄ α΄Ι΄ Κα΄ α΄α΄Ι΄Ι΄α΄α΄ α΄ α΄Ι΄Κ α΄Κα΄ κ°α΄α΄ΚΙͺΙ΄Ι’κ± Κα΄ Κα΄κ± κ°α΄Κ α΄α΄α΄α΄α΄, α΄κ± α΄Κα΄Κ Ι΄α΄α΄ ΙͺΙ’α΄α΄α΄ α΄ 4 α΄‘α΄Κ Κα΄Κα΄α΄Ιͺα΄Ι΄κ±ΚΙͺα΄.
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The Good
β I loved the communication and the gained consent in the spicy scenes. Hearing Tatum tell them exactly what she wants and how she wants it was π₯΅π₯΅π₯΅.
β I liked how all the characters were their own person, with a clear difference in personalities, how they think and what they want. The male characters relationship between each other helps to strengthen the relationship with Tatum, and I was so glad when finally Callum joined the relationship.
The Bad
βSome parts of the storyline felt rushed, and other parts felt like they had been introduced but never fully developed. I would have also loved to have delved more into why Callum was a control freak, why Jace was a Dom and why Shawn needed praise. And why was the MM spice fade to black, there was such a set up for it and I was ready for it, and then nothing.
βThere are grammatical errors all through this, and it could have done with another couple of rounds of editing. It wasn't so bad that it took me out the story, but there are enough that I was noticing them.
TROPES
β«Έ Why Choose MMFM
β«Έ Hockey Romance
β«Έ Collage Romance
β«Έ LGBT
β«Έ Multiple POV
β«Έ Praise
β«Έ Forced Proximity
TWs
β«Έ Sexism / Misogyny
β«Έ Homophobia