A review by ladypherret
The Forward Line by K.G. Erin

emotional hopeful inspiring lighthearted fast-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character
• Strong character development? No
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

🌶️🌶️.5/5 - some scenes were skipped over (fade to black) and the scenes were relatively short. Overall there were a handful of on-page scenes(including group scenes).

There are some editing issues/typos, but it seems better than some reviews state, so I think some have been fixed. 

It has a cute storyline. However, the timeline jumps often and seems to skip over some scenes that could have been spelled out. Overall, I enjoyed this book and will definitely read the second one.

Would have liked to get the whole scene with Jace, and to actually have a scene with only Callum. Also - why fade-to-black the MM scene?

MMFM (very very light on the MM. mentioned. barely described)
HEA
3rd act breakup
College Hockey
F2L
E2L
Roommates-2-L
No cheating
Teammates (she plays too)