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Helfyre by Mariel Pomeroy
3.0

The plot of this book had soooo much potential. It got really muddy with the confusing politics, races, and language. Like those three things made this book really hard to read.

This was one of those books where i’d have to read the paragraph 3 times just to understand what the fuck was even happening, and the way it just jumps from scene to scene was so clunky. It was like impossibly to keep up.

I also kinda feel like there were a lot of things thrown into the book that were just all too convenient to the plot, which made it kind of