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Hail Mary by Kandi Steiner
1.25

giving up on romance novels actually 

this was a cute premise and reminds me of one of my favorite sports romances . It was set up to have all of the elements of that book: 
- plus size FMC
- football player MMC who is a good man 
- secret identities 
- FMC knowing a secret MMC doesn’t 
- pole dancing 

But ultimately, this was so disappointing, one of the most crucial things a good book has that it shows you the story instead of tells you about the plot the things we saw on-page Was that the two characters wanted to fuck each other and their smut scenes. We were told that they developed an online relationship., we were told that they deeply love each other. We were told why the FMC  was really mad at the MMC during the third act conflict. 

I was originally going to give it three stars because the beginning was fun and cute  however the epilogue pissed me off so bad  (who announces a pregnancy at a wedding??? also not the main couple of this book so why was it in this book)