hadiqa_a 's review for:

Shutout by Avery Keelan
2.0

I don’t think we all read the same book. This book had sooo much potential. I just don’t think it was fleshed out properly. I don’t even think if was edited, like, at all. Why was the fact that Sera was essentially groomed by her best friends brother just brushed over????? Am I missing something? And there was soooo much unnecessary details. Why am I reading the process of someone putting tooth paste on a tooth brush??? Why am I reading in unnecessary detail about how Tyler puts on his gear???? I skimmed over so much in this book. The first book was unnecessarily long and detailed and this one could’ve been the 300 pages that it is but with a lot more relevant detail and a lot less unnecessary descriptions of things. It was soooo boring!!!!!!!!! Please have this looked at by an editor or something.