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One for All by Lillie Lainoff

DNF @53%

The language is florid and a bit overdone—too much description of silly things—dripping jewels and melting eye colors. I know some French, so the constant inclusion of French didn’t bother me, but aren’t they speaking French all the time? Why add things in French when it’s supposed to be their native language? It was nice to have some disability rep. I liked that the idea of not knowing how you’d feel every day when you wake up was included, but it seemed like it didn’t really affect her unless it was convenient?