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A review by themarishale
Dukes Prefer Bluestockings by Bianca Blythe
3.0
I wanted to love this book.
Truly.
However, whomever edited it did it a great disservice.
I prefer to be lost in a book and its characters, but when “Charlotte” becomes “Georgiana” from one paragraph to the next, when she is then referred to as Miss Butterfield instead of Butterworth, and whole passages are repeated to the point that I have to re-read the page to ensure I’m not seeing things, well, it’s hard to stay immersed in the story.
Further to that, bits of the story felt disjointed and drawn out for no purpose other than to extend word count.
With a good editor, this could have been a darling romance, but I found it rather disappointing.
Truly.
However, whomever edited it did it a great disservice.
I prefer to be lost in a book and its characters, but when “Charlotte” becomes “Georgiana” from one paragraph to the next, when she is then referred to as Miss Butterfield instead of Butterworth, and whole passages are repeated to the point that I have to re-read the page to ensure I’m not seeing things, well, it’s hard to stay immersed in the story.
Further to that, bits of the story felt disjointed and drawn out for no purpose other than to extend word count.
With a good editor, this could have been a darling romance, but I found it rather disappointing.