A review by pewterwolf
How to Catch a Queen by Alyssa Cole

3.0

3.5 Stars.

I had such high hopes with this. Such high hopes! And yet, it didn't hit the heights. There are moments and ideas that work and I wanted more from, and yet there are others that just didn't.

A big issue I had was the romance. This is a marriage of convenience and our two leads - Shanti and Sanyu - fall in love. But the romance between them is... well... non-existent. There is instant attraction, but we rarely see this. And them falling in love with each other... I didn't see it. It's hard to warm to a royal romance novel if there is no romance. Maybe this should love yourself story...

I liked both leads: Shanti, who has always wanted to be queen so she can do some good, but feeling like she can't do any as she is a woman in a male dominated society with men around her who thought Queens should be quiet, pretty and gentle (basically, seen and not heard). The complete opposite to who she is (I found I kept reading this because of Shanti. I instantly liked her and she was one of the main reasons I kept reading/audiobooking this).

Sanyu took a little longer to warm to. He's trying to figure out how to be a good king like his father, but struggling with anxiety and grief (I liked how Alyssa tackled mental health). But the reason who it'll take longer for people to warm to Sanyu is because he blindly follows his his advisor, an almost father-like figure. There feel like there are signs of emotional abuse he gave to Sanyu as a child and, not only that, the advisor seems determined to keep the kingdom as it was and, because of this, he would undermine Sanyu and do things behind his back (and OOOOH, I hated the advisor SO MUCH. I do understand why he was doing/saying what he was [I don't agree with him in the slightest and I wish Sanyu saw it and spoke up sooner, but I found him sexist, a misogynist and other things that made me want to DNF this multiply times!).

And other things didn't work. The ending felt rushed (example is Sanyu and his relationship with his advisor. That felt really rushed and didn't feel true to the either characters) and things were revealed and some of them had no clue.

But I keep coming back to the romance. There's no romance in this and that is the book's biggest problem. I wanted to root for Sanyu and Shanti and root for their happily ever after, but there was nothing to root for. I rooted for Shanti and Sanyu separately, but not together. Hell, there was a good chunk of this book that I was rooting for Shanti alone and was waiting for her to go all Shonda Rhimes on me and her to say something like this:

I love me

This book had potential, and some of the potential was on point and met. Others not so much. But I do have two other Alyssa Cole books - [book:A Prince on Paper|38622940] & [b:When No One is Watching|49398072|When No One is Watching|Alyssa Cole|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1585146341l/49398072._SY75_.jpg|73236183] - so intrigued to see what these are going to be like.