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A review by lundos
Survival by Dave Willmarth
2.0
The main character is too smooth in how he operates, lucky with the people he meets and situations that happend, and experienced in handling leadership, people well everything. He simply has no draw backs, so the survival and how to grow stakes quickly disappear.
I like the setup, the way it expands, the fame points (not the Asgardian alien race), and where the story wants to go. Its just missing... more. Everything seems too easy. Every bad situation is handled in a few pages. Every battle ends more or less the same way.
I like the setup, the way it expands, the fame points (not the Asgardian alien race), and where the story wants to go. Its just missing... more. Everything seems too easy. Every bad situation is handled in a few pages. Every battle ends more or less the same way.