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I liked it, didn’t love it. There were details like her broken arm and characters like Mike that just conveniently disappeared from the story after their purpose was served. I flipped back thinking I missed something regarding the timeline because they had talked about how long it would be before her cast comes off and then it’s never spoken of again. I guess I expected some sort of brief mention or cheesy celebration or something once it finally got removed since it marked the night they first spoke to each other. I would have loved to get some chapters from Calvin to hear his perspective. Or for the story to include more from Mike. Why wasn’t he invited when everyone came over to share stories and information about Holland with Calvin? That would have been a great opportunity to incorporate more information about Calvin. Then the last chunk of the novel felt like a lot of events were manufactured purely for the sake of drama. I started skimming through these later sections to get through them quicker, especially because there was a level of predictability to them.