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A review by jazi62
Vera and the Vegas V: Part One by Sarah Blue, Ashley Bennett
1.0
So the good....Gus.. a non binary character done well and I commend the authors for the research they clearly did before writing this character.
The okay....everything else...the story just read a step above Wattpad....the pacing was very uneven somethings were thrown in your face making the characters seem like they had a bad case of word vomit while other questions were left unanswered the character development was just as uneven because of this.
This is Part One so we were left hanging ...not sure if I will continue.
The okay....everything else...the story just read a step above Wattpad....the pacing was very uneven somethings were thrown in your face making the characters seem like they had a bad case of word vomit while other questions were left unanswered the character development was just as uneven because of this.
This is Part One so we were left hanging ...not sure if I will continue.