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A review by kirsten_shergold
Homerun Proposal by Maren Moore
lighthearted
relaxing
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
"𝒴𝑜𝓊𝓇'𝓇𝑒 𝓈𝑜 𝒻𝓊𝒸𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝓅𝑒𝓇𝒻𝑒𝒸𝓉, 𝐻𝒶𝓁𝓁𝒾𝑒. 𝒮𝑜 𝑔𝑜𝒹𝒹𝒶𝓂𝓃 𝒷𝑒𝒶𝓊𝓉𝒾𝒻𝓊𝓁"
Ladies, if you are ever with a guy who does not treat you like Lane treats hallie he dose not deserve you!!!
"𝐵𝑒𝒸𝒶𝓊𝓈𝑒 𝐻𝒶𝓁𝓁𝒾𝑒... 𝓎𝑜𝓊'𝓇𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝑜𝓃𝓁𝓎 𝓅𝑒𝓇𝓈𝑜𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝒾 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝓂𝑒 𝒶𝓇𝑜𝓊𝓃𝒹"
Overall this book was genuinely really good up to about 60% when it became nothing more than erotica.
The third act brakup felt super out of pocket and even worse was the fact she never actually tells lane what she saw, I doubt he would cheat on her but i feel like she should have mentioned it tho.
"𝒴𝑜𝓊 𝓇𝑒𝒶𝒹𝑒𝓎 𝓉𝑜 𝒶𝒹𝓂𝒾𝓉 𝓎𝑜𝓊'𝓇𝑒 𝒾𝓃 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝒽𝑒𝓇 𝓎𝑒𝓉? ... 𝒞𝒶𝓊𝓈𝑒 𝓎𝑜𝓊 𝒹𝑒𝒻𝒾𝓃𝒶𝓉𝓁𝓎 𝒶𝓇𝑒"
2 well writen characters going throught there own shit, For lane it is not knowing what he wants to do in his feuture for Hallie it is being waitlisted for her dream school.
This book is definatly more charecter than plot based and was an easy read, I found when I had time to sit and read I didn't get destracted with this book and could easily read 100+ pages per sitting, but becuase of exams I didn't have as much time as i would have liked to read which is why this took me a few days to get through.
𝒴𝑜𝓊 𝒽𝒶𝒹 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝑜𝒻 𝓊𝓈 𝑜𝓃 𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝓀𝓃𝑒𝑒𝓈 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝑔𝒾𝓇𝓁, 𝒞𝑜𝓁𝓁𝒾𝓃𝓈. 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝒾𝓈 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝒶 𝒯𝒶𝓎𝓁𝑜𝓇 𝒮𝓌𝒾𝒻𝓉 𝓈𝑜𝓃𝑔…” “𝒴𝑜𝓊 𝓁𝒾𝓈𝓉𝑒𝓃 𝓉𝑜 𝒯𝒶𝓎𝓁𝑜𝓇 𝒮𝓌𝒾𝒻𝓉?” “𝐵𝓇𝑜.” 𝐻𝑒 𝒷𝓁𝒶𝓃𝒸𝒽𝑒𝓈. “𝒟𝑜 𝓃𝑜𝓉 𝒹𝒾𝓈𝓇𝑒𝓈𝓅𝑒𝒸𝓉 𝓂𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓌𝒶𝓎. 𝐼 𝒶𝓂 𝒶 𝒮𝓌𝒾𝒻𝓉𝒾𝑒 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓁𝒾𝒻𝑒.”
Ladies, if you are ever with a guy who does not treat you like Lane treats hallie he dose not deserve you!!!
"𝐵𝑒𝒸𝒶𝓊𝓈𝑒 𝐻𝒶𝓁𝓁𝒾𝑒... 𝓎𝑜𝓊'𝓇𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝑜𝓃𝓁𝓎 𝓅𝑒𝓇𝓈𝑜𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝒾 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝓂𝑒 𝒶𝓇𝑜𝓊𝓃𝒹"
Overall this book was genuinely really good up to about 60% when it became nothing more than erotica.
The third act brakup felt super out of pocket and even worse was the fact she never actually tells lane what she saw, I doubt he would cheat on her but i feel like she should have mentioned it tho.
"𝒴𝑜𝓊 𝓇𝑒𝒶𝒹𝑒𝓎 𝓉𝑜 𝒶𝒹𝓂𝒾𝓉 𝓎𝑜𝓊'𝓇𝑒 𝒾𝓃 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝒽𝑒𝓇 𝓎𝑒𝓉? ... 𝒞𝒶𝓊𝓈𝑒 𝓎𝑜𝓊 𝒹𝑒𝒻𝒾𝓃𝒶𝓉𝓁𝓎 𝒶𝓇𝑒"
2 well writen characters going throught there own shit, For lane it is not knowing what he wants to do in his feuture for Hallie it is being waitlisted for her dream school.
This book is definatly more charecter than plot based and was an easy read, I found when I had time to sit and read I didn't get destracted with this book and could easily read 100+ pages per sitting, but becuase of exams I didn't have as much time as i would have liked to read which is why this took me a few days to get through.
𝒴𝑜𝓊 𝒽𝒶𝒹 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝑜𝒻 𝓊𝓈 𝑜𝓃 𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝓀𝓃𝑒𝑒𝓈 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝑔𝒾𝓇𝓁, 𝒞𝑜𝓁𝓁𝒾𝓃𝓈. 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝒾𝓈 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝒶 𝒯𝒶𝓎𝓁𝑜𝓇 𝒮𝓌𝒾𝒻𝓉 𝓈𝑜𝓃𝑔…” “𝒴𝑜𝓊 𝓁𝒾𝓈𝓉𝑒𝓃 𝓉𝑜 𝒯𝒶𝓎𝓁𝑜𝓇 𝒮𝓌𝒾𝒻𝓉?” “𝐵𝓇𝑜.” 𝐻𝑒 𝒷𝓁𝒶𝓃𝒸𝒽𝑒𝓈. “𝒟𝑜 𝓃𝑜𝓉 𝒹𝒾𝓈𝓇𝑒𝓈𝓅𝑒𝒸𝓉 𝓂𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓌𝒶𝓎. 𝐼 𝒶𝓂 𝒶 𝒮𝓌𝒾𝒻𝓉𝒾𝑒 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓁𝒾𝒻𝑒.”