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A review by little2wing7
Technically Speaking by Michael Elliot
2.0
I really love on your dramas. But this one kind of fell short. It felt like a movie script instead of a script meant for an audio drama. I think it relied a lot on nonverbal cues between the characters, which made it a little confusing. But there is a way to write nonverbal cues and body language into the dialogue without it, having to be awkward.*Audio dramas i'm using the dictation function of the keyboard because I am blind
Anyway, the story also skip through a lot of scenes without really having a clear distinction between one or the next. Some of the voice actors sounded the same so I think it's really important to create something to make it a little more obvious that there is a scene change. I'm not an expert, but I am a writer and I've worked in media production this war. And in general, I enjoy audio dramas immensely.*Before I'm not trying to tell the writer how to do their job, but I am just trying to give a review about what I felt was lacking and what made me not enjoy the story as much.
Also, I wish there was a little bit more about the PR disaster that it became and also a little more discussion about how "people like us don't always get through the front door. "I would have liked a little more of that because it really adds layers to the story.
I did very much appreciate the disability disability, though, as a disabled person myself. *Disability visibility.
I also don't like how the conflict was result. And the ending scene felt really awkward. It felt like there was a lot of dead air, which is part of the nonverbal cues I mentioned. Audio drama scripts are so very different from a movie script and it really takes a certain level of creativity to really put everything you want to say into it.
Another reviewer pointed out that the scenes changed too quickly. The scenes were indeed much too short for my lighting before they switched on to another scene. I think it made the story much more confusing for me because I had barely processed what was happening. We don't have the advantage of , a visual aid with an audio drama so quick scene changes really aren't effective in my opinion.*Liking
Anyway, the story also skip through a lot of scenes without really having a clear distinction between one or the next. Some of the voice actors sounded the same so I think it's really important to create something to make it a little more obvious that there is a scene change. I'm not an expert, but I am a writer and I've worked in media production this war. And in general, I enjoy audio dramas immensely.*Before I'm not trying to tell the writer how to do their job, but I am just trying to give a review about what I felt was lacking and what made me not enjoy the story as much.
Also, I wish there was a little bit more about the PR disaster that it became and also a little more discussion about how "people like us don't always get through the front door. "I would have liked a little more of that because it really adds layers to the story.
I did very much appreciate the disability disability, though, as a disabled person myself. *Disability visibility.
I also don't like how the conflict was result. And the ending scene felt really awkward. It felt like there was a lot of dead air, which is part of the nonverbal cues I mentioned. Audio drama scripts are so very different from a movie script and it really takes a certain level of creativity to really put everything you want to say into it.
Another reviewer pointed out that the scenes changed too quickly. The scenes were indeed much too short for my lighting before they switched on to another scene. I think it made the story much more confusing for me because I had barely processed what was happening. We don't have the advantage of , a visual aid with an audio drama so quick scene changes really aren't effective in my opinion.*Liking