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A review by nalenard
Demons Do It Better by Louisa Masters
2.0
No relationship development (spoilers)
The premise was interesting but there was no actual development with the relationship between the characters. They had sex. They avoided each other for 5 years at work. Gideon became a little touchy feely. They had sex. Oh… I guess “we’re a couple now”. There was no discussion or depth. It was like the author forgot they had to SHOW not TELL that there was a relationship developing. The relationship between Alistair and Sam was more developed than between Sam and Gideon.
Conversely, the internal monologue about random things kinda dragged on and on. There were several parts of the book that could have been cut to help the story flow more smoothly. The idea behind the story was great. The execution, not so great.
The premise was interesting but there was no actual development with the relationship between the characters. They had sex. They avoided each other for 5 years at work. Gideon became a little touchy feely. They had sex. Oh… I guess “we’re a couple now”. There was no discussion or depth. It was like the author forgot they had to SHOW not TELL that there was a relationship developing. The relationship between Alistair and Sam was more developed than between Sam and Gideon.
Conversely, the internal monologue about random things kinda dragged on and on. There were several parts of the book that could have been cut to help the story flow more smoothly. The idea behind the story was great. The execution, not so great.