A review by harasnicole
Play by Piper Lawson

3.0

I enjoyed this one, I truly did. But the editing kept bringing me out of the story because there'd be a missing word that I'd have to fill in myself, and other typos that really took me out of the story. Add to that the fact that the progress of the story really threw me for a loop because I'd be at 30% and nearing the end? How does that work? Then I found out out that it's because there's another full-length story included in it for free, essentially. This is a me problem, I fully admit this, but I would've preferred if this had just been the one story that I had originally paid for, and then the other story that came with had its own and not been tacked on to something else.