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A review by erinmae
The Haunting of Hacket House by Astrid Addams
2.0
I think this was Harry Potter fan fic. Maybe? I'm not sure, but HP was mentioned a bit too often.
The story went from past to present with absolutely no flow. All of a sudden Jane was talking about her ex and her child. Names were thrown into the story without the reader getting a clue to who they are. The beginning of the story refers to her ex husband as " he" or "him", then further into the book his name is suddenly Richard.
I had to re read way too many paragraphs to try and figure out what was happening. I felt like I was constantly missing something, only to re read a section and find out that nope, it just doesn't make sense.
The story went from past to present with absolutely no flow. All of a sudden Jane was talking about her ex and her child. Names were thrown into the story without the reader getting a clue to who they are. The beginning of the story refers to her ex husband as " he" or "him", then further into the book his name is suddenly Richard.
I had to re read way too many paragraphs to try and figure out what was happening. I felt like I was constantly missing something, only to re read a section and find out that nope, it just doesn't make sense.