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A review by addy1991
Mrs. Perivale and the Blue Fire Crystal by Dash Hoffman
3.0
2.75 stars
The story and the characters were good but the writing left much to be desired. There was too much description and the writing wasn't easy to follow so I was unable to picture things in my mind while I read. The author blurb indicates that this author writes books in 7-10 days and I feel that if more time was taken, this book would have been better. I received this book and its sequel as a gift so will read the next book as well and hope the writing improves.
The story and the characters were good but the writing left much to be desired. There was too much description and the writing wasn't easy to follow so I was unable to picture things in my mind while I read. The author blurb indicates that this author writes books in 7-10 days and I feel that if more time was taken, this book would have been better. I received this book and its sequel as a gift so will read the next book as well and hope the writing improves.