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Wholehearted by Cate Ashwood
3.0

Sweet story, but I'm not sure I really felt the connection between the guys. I think it would have helped to have gotten some of the story from Lucas' POV, and not just Declan's. Lucas stayed a mystery through the whole story, and so I didn't really understand why he got so angry at what Declan did.

The bit with Mack and Oliver also felt out of place, like it should have been in a novella or a short all their own, it just didn't fit in with this story.