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A review by xami101
The Insiders by Tijan
3.0
2.75 stars
Honestly I am kind of confused, the overall story is kind of interesting but the way this story is written a bit awkward especially the intimate scenes between Kash and Bailey. I don't understand why this is labeled as NA but it the intimate scenes are written in such a lukewarm manner or skipped over entirely. Instead of showing the attraction between the main characters, we're told about it through exposition when a character talks about an intimate encounter that's supposedly happened but the author didn't write down. And the couple of intimate scenes that are actually shown in the last third of the book, are incredibly awkwardly and poorly written. I hope the rest of the series isn't written like this. Honestly, you could have just labeled this YA, the way this book is written it shouldn't be in the new adult category, it's incredibly misleading.
Honestly I am kind of confused, the overall story is kind of interesting but the way this story is written a bit awkward especially the intimate scenes between Kash and Bailey. I don't understand why this is labeled as NA but it the intimate scenes are written in such a lukewarm manner or skipped over entirely. Instead of showing the attraction between the main characters, we're told about it through exposition when a character talks about an intimate encounter that's supposedly happened but the author didn't write down. And the couple of intimate scenes that are actually shown in the last third of the book, are incredibly awkwardly and poorly written. I hope the rest of the series isn't written like this. Honestly, you could have just labeled this YA, the way this book is written it shouldn't be in the new adult category, it's incredibly misleading.