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samwatts 's review for:
Lady of Shadows
by Melissa K. Roehrich
3.5. The story is still pretty good. But the details are extremely frustrating. The dialogue is immature—these are centuries-old immortal beings, not teenagers. Even the twenty-year-old acts too young for her age. The actions these people take are also fairly wild at times.
There is definitely a need for a better editor. The vocabulary and sentence structure need serious work.
There is definitely a need for a better editor. The vocabulary and sentence structure need serious work.