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A review by lilybear
The Proposal by Piper Scott
1.0
I did not enjoy this. Aaron presented himself as a selfish and irresponsible man who had no business having unprotected sex with a highschooler. Gage was a lovesick idiot who put Aaron above everything, including his own child. Everything was just so ridiculously unrealistic that it was more infuriating than anything. Aaron evolved from selfish prick to selfish jealous prick. And I had no love for any of the characters and therefore could not enjoy the sex scenes.
I think the fact that Piper Scott had them maintain a relationship during the 5 year separation is what ruined the secret baby gimmick for me. Also Knott-My-Problem was the only voice of reason and maybe Gage should've got with him instead.
"TD [Gauge] deserves a fucking man, not a little manlet who can’t hold his tongue long enough not to jump to conclusions."
“If you need to ask that, then maybe you don’t deserve to have Gage back"
“To think that after all that time, seeing the love he had for you, all the tiny, indulgent smiles and the affection in his eyes… it’s hard. It’s hard to have been there beside him as he made sacrifices and stupid decisions for your sake year after year, and harder still to know that you’re already at each other’s throats..."
I think the fact that Piper Scott had them maintain a relationship during the 5 year separation is what ruined the secret baby gimmick for me. Also Knott-My-Problem was the only voice of reason and maybe Gage should've got with him instead.
"TD [Gauge] deserves a fucking man, not a little manlet who can’t hold his tongue long enough not to jump to conclusions."
“If you need to ask that, then maybe you don’t deserve to have Gage back"
“To think that after all that time, seeing the love he had for you, all the tiny, indulgent smiles and the affection in his eyes… it’s hard. It’s hard to have been there beside him as he made sacrifices and stupid decisions for your sake year after year, and harder still to know that you’re already at each other’s throats..."