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melg14 's review for:
Primal Sin
by Ariana Nash
DNF @75% (skimmed the end)
So I was looking forward to this because it was enemies to lovers and it would have been good regardless of its predictability, however the choice of third person narrative was wrong. We are thrown into the deep end of the story where the MC already knows what is happening but is purposefully making everything vague and not explaining terms or rules or anything. I felt a huge disconnect with both MCs and the world because of it. There was very little world building. Even going back in open minded and ignoring my peeve of the disconnect didn't help—it was just boring and forced.
So I was looking forward to this because it was enemies to lovers and it would have been good regardless of its predictability, however the choice of third person narrative was wrong. We are thrown into the deep end of the story where the MC already knows what is happening but is purposefully making everything vague and not explaining terms or rules or anything. I felt a huge disconnect with both MCs and the world because of it. There was very little world building. Even going back in open minded and ignoring my peeve of the disconnect didn't help—it was just boring and forced.