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bwarr7312 's review for:
Ruthless Rival
by L.J. Shen
It took me a little bit to get into this one. The beginning felt very back-and-forth in a way that not only didn’t help to progress the story, but also didn’t provide a lot to build a strong backstory either.
After the first third or so, it did get better, but I still struggled at times.
ie. our looks don’t change typically THAT much from teens to early 30s. I know the FMC thought the MMC was dead but come on! How did she not know this was the boy she fell in love with?
After the first third or so, it did get better, but I still struggled at times.
ie. our looks don’t change typically THAT much from teens to early 30s. I know the FMC thought the MMC was dead but come on! How did she not know this was the boy she fell in love with?