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A review by frahhn
Line and Orbit by Lisa Soem, Sunny Moraine
2.0
1) There really, really needed to be better division between POV parts in the kindle formatting. I kept getting pulled out of the story in the worst way, trying to reorient myself
2) Couldn't really connect to any of the characters, and I had no idea what pulled the MCs together.
3) Villain's shift into extreme, reckless villainy didn't make sense, based on her cool rationale for most of the book. However, I didn't feel a pull to read those parts of the work deeply, maybe I missed something.
4) witch lady was really really annoying, riddlespeak is exhausting
5) I love trek & all the references were fun
6) some of the lines in this book were awesome, i liked the musing on the classic trek line.
7) this felt very "white dude is saved by indigenous people because ----" and that made me kind of uncomfortable. Especially with the vision quest stuff, but then they're Jewish I think?? with the old testament refrences? I thought they were Romani for a hot second but either way it was odd.
2) Couldn't really connect to any of the characters, and I had no idea what pulled the MCs together.
3) Villain's shift into extreme, reckless villainy didn't make sense, based on her cool rationale for most of the book. However, I didn't feel a pull to read those parts of the work deeply, maybe I missed something.
4) witch lady was really really annoying, riddlespeak is exhausting
5) I love trek & all the references were fun
6) some of the lines in this book were awesome, i liked the musing on the classic trek line.
7) this felt very "white dude is saved by indigenous people because ----" and that made me kind of uncomfortable. Especially with the vision quest stuff, but then they're Jewish I think?? with the old testament refrences? I thought they were Romani for a hot second but either way it was odd.