dearmassacre 's review for:

The Veiled Kingdom by Holly Renee

2.75

fast-paced

Plot or Character Driven: Character

Strong character development: No

Loveable characters: Complicated

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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This reads like the worst fanfic has to offer: no strong character development, no world building, no compelling plot. The FMC is weirdly subservient to the douchebag MMC despite him being nasty to her 99% of the time. Even for enemies to lovers, their relationship is flimsy. The sex was fine.