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A review by penandswordinn
The Haunting of the Old Yellow House of Millard Road by D.A.L.
2.0
The author was kind enough to send me a copy of this book for an honest review.
While the concept of the book was interesting, I did not find the reading enjoyable. The writing was far too repetitive, the characters did not speak like children, and I had no feeling of where we were. This read as a first draft than a finished product. In my opinion, the author can take the time to edit this book to bring in more descriptions to give a better flow to the story, possibly fewer characters, and a better look at the dialogue.
While the concept of the book was interesting, I did not find the reading enjoyable. The writing was far too repetitive, the characters did not speak like children, and I had no feeling of where we were. This read as a first draft than a finished product. In my opinion, the author can take the time to edit this book to bring in more descriptions to give a better flow to the story, possibly fewer characters, and a better look at the dialogue.