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A review by hlou14
Forgive Me Father by Katerina St Clair
2.0
The pacing was all over the place, and I couldn’t tell if days or weeks had passed between scenes. The sex scenes were decent, if choreographed a little confusingly, but the final quarter of the book was a hard push for me. The integration of kink was, in my opinion, a little messy - too much was trying to happen at the same time.
Overall, I appreciated the premise of the story and was looking forward to the trope, but would have appreciated stronger writing for the plot around the copious (not a complaint!) smut, more buildup, and less telling more showing.
Overall, I appreciated the premise of the story and was looking forward to the trope, but would have appreciated stronger writing for the plot around the copious (not a complaint!) smut, more buildup, and less telling more showing.