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genuinely so bad.
first story: everything happens way too fast and overall the story is anticlimactic. the characters were flat and the dialogue is not at all how people spoke to each other over IM
second story: basically every question is has an em-dash before the question mark even when the question is fully formulated. how did that get by an editor? an “and she was actually dead the whole time dundundun” story
third story: could’ve gotten into it, sort of absurdist, but again the writing style just didn’t do it for me
overall, felt like someone’s vent writing, which is fine, but should have been polished for publication
first story: everything happens way too fast and overall the story is anticlimactic. the characters were flat and the dialogue is not at all how people spoke to each other over IM
second story: basically every question is has an em-dash before the question mark even when the question is fully formulated. how did that get by an editor? an “and she was actually dead the whole time dundundun” story
third story: could’ve gotten into it, sort of absurdist, but again the writing style just didn’t do it for me
overall, felt like someone’s vent writing, which is fine, but should have been polished for publication