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Playing with Fire by Ria Wilde
2.0
dark emotional medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

1. Why are some monster playing games and bets over women, like high schoolers? 
2. “I just need a wife. And an heir. A pretty little thing to warm my bed.” 
     It could have been better  sentenced. 
3. “You're a damn pig," She growls, teeth grinding together. "Oink," I grin at her. 
     Can authors stop doing this?