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Untouchable
by Shon
Cute Story
“Untouchable” by Shon was a cute story. I did enjoy the plot and the characters even though they were very frustrating at times. This story started off strong, but it fizzled out at the middle to the end. I found things to be extremely repetitive. Many scenes did nothing to move the plot along. This story also had some grammatical errors and the large spacing between the paragraphs was very odd and took some time getting used to. Tallulah and her dang rules drove me nuts. I had a hard time connecting with her character. By the time the reasons behind her rules and abandonment issues were revealed, I was pretty disinterested. While I wasn’t a fan of Tallulah, I did love me some Pierre. He was everything! At times I felt he was being a fool for Tallulah, but the heart wants what it wants. I loved his personality and the way he loved and doted on Tallulah. Overall this was a solid read. I felt that it honestly would have been better off as a novella. I’m looking forward to reading more from Shon.
“Untouchable” by Shon was a cute story. I did enjoy the plot and the characters even though they were very frustrating at times. This story started off strong, but it fizzled out at the middle to the end. I found things to be extremely repetitive. Many scenes did nothing to move the plot along. This story also had some grammatical errors and the large spacing between the paragraphs was very odd and took some time getting used to. Tallulah and her dang rules drove me nuts. I had a hard time connecting with her character. By the time the reasons behind her rules and abandonment issues were revealed, I was pretty disinterested. While I wasn’t a fan of Tallulah, I did love me some Pierre. He was everything! At times I felt he was being a fool for Tallulah, but the heart wants what it wants. I loved his personality and the way he loved and doted on Tallulah. Overall this was a solid read. I felt that it honestly would have been better off as a novella. I’m looking forward to reading more from Shon.