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A review by flazzy
Introductions by C.L. Stone
2.0
DNF at 23%
The characters became all too familiar with the protagonist far too quickly, accepting her with ease that was unnatural -not out of the ballpark unnatural- but unnatural nonetheless. I personally need to want to unearth little bits of the surrounding characters and have things revealed slowly enough for me to crave it, but not too slowly that I become frustrated and lose interest.
What's more, is that nothing even warranted the instant familiarity. I understand that the protagonist was sheltered her whole life, but even being at school and around people even a little bit -- you would not be so naive. She has no strength and is pulled around like some sort of secondary character and doted on as if they all knew each other so quickly.
Also, she seems to display a preference to the first guy she met, which is cute and shit, but it's supposed to be a reverse-harem. Favourites ruin the whole "reverse-harem" theme. It makes me feel like there's no point to all these extra guys continuously coming in, because the affection will always be more centred on the first guy.
I don't know. The plot and writing seems quite juvenile and honestly I felt like I was wasting my time by reading it.
The characters became all too familiar with the protagonist far too quickly, accepting her with ease that was unnatural -not out of the ballpark unnatural- but unnatural nonetheless. I personally need to want to unearth little bits of the surrounding characters and have things revealed slowly enough for me to crave it, but not too slowly that I become frustrated and lose interest.
What's more, is that nothing even warranted the instant familiarity. I understand that the protagonist was sheltered her whole life, but even being at school and around people even a little bit -- you would not be so naive. She has no strength and is pulled around like some sort of secondary character and doted on as if they all knew each other so quickly.
Also, she seems to display a preference to the first guy she met, which is cute and shit, but it's supposed to be a reverse-harem. Favourites ruin the whole "reverse-harem" theme. It makes me feel like there's no point to all these extra guys continuously coming in, because the affection will always be more centred on the first guy.
I don't know. The plot and writing seems quite juvenile and honestly I felt like I was wasting my time by reading it.