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vhlm 's review for:
Everyone I Know Is Dying
by Emily Slapper
I really didn't like the protagonist and didn't think her actions and characterarch that plausible in that rather short time - it also left out certain aspects of everyday life (which made the entire story not add up, really) and was full of commas-errors (maybe to make it match colloquial language more? Made one stumble about those sentences, though).
At least she sort of ends up going to therapy in the end, but everything that leads to it doesn't seem too plausable, like, it doesn't cover the whole picture but the author didn't know any better how to write that arch.
At least she sort of ends up going to therapy in the end, but everything that leads to it doesn't seem too plausable, like, it doesn't cover the whole picture but the author didn't know any better how to write that arch.