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mhco09 's review for:
Knot Your Damn Omega
by Devyn Sinclair
DID NOT FINISH
I just can't put myself through 500 pages of this. It wasn't bad...but the lack of conflict got to me.
The positive:
- I really liked the writing style, it pulled me right in from the beginning.
- The FMC was very self-aware and it was refreshing.
- The relationship between the twin sisters was awesome.
The negative:
- Like I said, there wasn't really any conflict. The relationships were too perfect. The characters had basically no flaws except for the FMC who was super insecure (at least the insecurity came from somewhere valid).
- The emphasis put on fluids in the sex scene was quite disturbing. I read a lot of smut, but I don't like it when I feel like I'm reading hardcore porn. For example, the FMC was craving the taste of cum and was deep throating left and right. Fluids kept gushing everywhere.
SpoilerOne time one of the guys was like: I'll put my cum on a vanilla cupcake and make you eat it!... Sorry WHAT?! That's just gross.
- I could not distinguish between the 5 MMC. They worked at the same place and all had tattoos and big dicks.
So yeah... It was okay I guess. If it were 300 pages I would have finished, but 500 is way too long.
The positive:
- I really liked the writing style, it pulled me right in from the beginning.
- The FMC was very self-aware and it was refreshing.
- The relationship between the twin sisters was awesome.
The negative:
- Like I said, there wasn't really any conflict. The relationships were too perfect. The characters had basically no flaws except for the FMC who was super insecure (at least the insecurity came from somewhere valid).
- The emphasis put on fluids in the sex scene was quite disturbing. I read a lot of smut, but I don't like it when I feel like I'm reading hardcore porn. For example, the FMC was craving the taste of cum and was deep throating left and right. Fluids kept gushing everywhere.
SpoilerOne time one of the guys was like: I'll put my cum on a vanilla cupcake and make you eat it!... Sorry WHAT?! That's just gross.
- I could not distinguish between the 5 MMC. They worked at the same place and all had tattoos and big dicks.
So yeah... It was okay I guess. If it were 300 pages I would have finished, but 500 is way too long.