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mparker 's review for:

1.0
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I rarely give 1 star reviews. This was so terrible. The grammar was bad, the lack of commas was bad and everyone constantly saying each others names was distracting. And the story didn’t make any sense this was all so so so bad and and the spice was both lacking, out of the blue, and I’m not convinced the author has ever had an orgasm from a sexual partner before. It was like someone described to her what sex was and she wrote it based solely on that.