A review by krover
Kiss of Death by Alice Wilde

2.0

The overall plot was okay and the author really, really needs both a developmental editor and a copy editor. There were a lot of errors with missing words and the wrong words that kept jolting me out of the story. Then the first almost 45% of the book could have been condensed to only about 20%. Really nothing new happened for that first 45% that hadn't already been happening/we knew was going to happen. Their writing could be so much improved if they got a bit of extra help in these couple of aspects of their writing.