A review by kmcquage
Unnatural Issue by Mercedes Lackey

2.0

You know, this book was almost good.

It only would have taken the deletion of a single line, maybe six words of text. But no, she has to destroy the little packet that makes an illusory version of her, and then USE IT TO DEFEAT THE BAD GUY. Editing, people. It isn't hard.

I don't actually blame Lackey for that, as much as I blame her editor.