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A review by kat_figs
If We Were Villains by M.L. Rio
dark
emotional
mysterious
sad
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
I had mixed feelings about this book. On the one hand, I thought the first 100 pages were excellently plotted and paced, and I loved the complicated relationship between Oliver and James. I completely related to Oliver’s yearning and repression of his sexuality, and thought it was well-handled. On the other hand, I feel the book lacks strong characterization of Richard as well as some of the main group of friends. He came across as such a cartoon villain—I found it hard to believe that he hadn’t acted at all in this way over the 4 years, that it was such a heel turn. He felt cartoonishly evil at times, to the point where the characters’ actions seem less shocking. I also think this book falls apart in Acts 3-5 and becomes a bit messy and drawn out. I would’ve loved more focus on Oliver and James, less on the day to day minutiae of the school and the other characters.
I’ve seen this book compared to The Secret History, and it is similar structurally. But I think where The Secret History succeeds more is by latching into the moral ambiguity of the characters, the senselessness of their murder, and by keeping the tight pacing in the second half.
I also have one final thought which is that the way Meredith is described is really dehumanizing. I understand that it’s part of her character’s struggle to be constantly objectified and feel like people only value her for her looks. But I didn’t like how that was constantly reinforced by Oliver salivating over her every two pages. I couldn’t tell if it was intentional on the part of the author to show that his feelings for her weren’t deep, or to show that his real affection was with James, and I wish it had been clearer if that’s the angle she was going for.
I’ve seen this book compared to The Secret History, and it is similar structurally. But I think where The Secret History succeeds more is by latching into the moral ambiguity of the characters, the senselessness of their murder, and by keeping the tight pacing in the second half.
I also have one final thought which is that the way Meredith is described is really dehumanizing. I understand that it’s part of her character’s struggle to be constantly objectified and feel like people only value her for her looks. But I didn’t like how that was constantly reinforced by Oliver salivating over her every two pages. I couldn’t tell if it was intentional on the part of the author to show that his feelings for her weren’t deep, or to show that his real affection was with James, and I wish it had been clearer if that’s the angle she was going for.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Death, Drug abuse, Domestic abuse, Murder, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Grief, and Physical abuse