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A review by poetry_drive
Eternally Damned by January Rayne
3.0
I’m not typically into vampire/witches but this wasn’t horrible. It’s a hard one to skim, although I did do it a bit. Most of the writing was necessary to the story and setting up the scene, it was just really wordy.
The prologue was great, the author really packed a lot of action and setup into it. I actually would have loved to read that timeline instead.
FMC is fine, not spectacular but not boring either. MMC’s feels like a boy to me, so when he gets all “alpha” it’s laughable. The HEA was a little too convenient and rushed at the end, imo. Magic seems to just cure all the things and was a heavy crutch in propelling the story forward, which is unfortunate.
Spice: 5/5 there’s a lot of it and it’s ok. Spice was great at first but then was almost too much, too often. 40% spice and 60% story.
The prologue was great, the author really packed a lot of action and setup into it. I actually would have loved to read that timeline instead.
FMC is fine, not spectacular but not boring either. MMC’s feels like a boy to me, so when he gets all “alpha” it’s laughable. The HEA was a little too convenient and rushed at the end, imo. Magic seems to just cure all the things and was a heavy crutch in propelling the story forward, which is unfortunate.
Spice: 5/5 there’s a lot of it and it’s ok. Spice was great at first but then was almost too much, too often. 40% spice and 60% story.