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A review by cedrisc
The Predator by RuNyx

dark mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

The writing is not great. Some words were incorrect and the sentence structure was wrong. I think it may be the author's first book, so I guess I should give them some slack. It needed editing. 
It was overly dramatic, soap opera-ish. The staring, the fact Morana refers to the MC as 'Tristan Caine' every single time. How the car supposably blows up from a single gunshot to the gas tank when that doesn't happen in real life. 

There were moments when I was fully in the story. The flashback when Tristan was a kid was one and the last scene in the rain unfortunately makes me want to read the second book. I wasn't going to before then. 

The worst analogy "She was more attached to her appendix than she was this house". LMAO
I would hope so since her appendix is literally attached to her body. 

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