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A review by amyiw
Belonging to Them by Brynn Paulin
2.0
2 1/2 erotic stars
Not really anything original, and being very short, a love at first sight.
Rayna is running away from an abuser and happens to break down in a town over populated by men. Uh huh, sure, 7 women to 150 population, no explanation why. Why is she driving such a beat up car? Why is she off the beaten path and lost. Hmm... well, after you completely suspend belief on that and the way that one of the men just asks her to join them, well... then you get to an OK to good erotica, not story.
There are a lot of people that complain that this is not menage but a "sharing" story as one is picked over the others. Umm, there are so many other things to complain about in the story and really that is not it. She has sex with multiple men, multiple times, what the hell do you think menage means? Polyamore? Triad? Well menage means that and more so get over it.
So was it a sexy read, I mean this is erotica right? Well, there were a some hotter sex scenes but mostly OK. So OK to good for a quicky, erotic read. Read it as part of the shorts challenge.
Not really anything original, and being very short, a love at first sight.
Rayna is running away from an abuser and happens to break down in a town over populated by men. Uh huh, sure, 7 women to 150 population, no explanation why. Why is she driving such a beat up car? Why is she off the beaten path and lost. Hmm... well, after you completely suspend belief on that and the way that one of the men just asks her to join them, well... then you get to an OK to good erotica, not story.
There are a lot of people that complain that this is not menage but a "sharing" story as one is picked over the others. Umm, there are so many other things to complain about in the story and really that is not it. She has sex with multiple men, multiple times, what the hell do you think menage means? Polyamore? Triad? Well menage means that and more so get over it.
So was it a sexy read, I mean this is erotica right? Well, there were a some hotter sex scenes but mostly OK. So OK to good for a quicky, erotic read. Read it as part of the shorts challenge.