A review by justchelsea
Fantasy of Flight by Kelly St. Clare

3.0

3.5 stars. The trouble with reading indie books on KU is often times the editing is very poor and seemingly nonexistent... This book suffers from grammatical errors and slight inconsistencies, which I have learned to mostly look past. The last book felt like it was written through google translate and I’m not sure if I just got used to it, or if the writing improved. As far as the story goes, there are a few things I’ve scratched me head at. For example, the Soars can make it to the other world in 3 days, but in the first book it took the Ravens 2 weeks... Anyway, forgiving these slight mistakes, this book also offers up some tropes that I normally cringe at: 1) A main character everyone desires, 2) a broody, semi-violent and dominating love interest that is actually a softy, 3) the main character keeps lying and hiding shit even though she keeps learning over and over again that it always does more harm than coming clean, 4) the enemy is entirely evil, horrible to their subjects, with no saving grace or good quality to speak of... etc. All that being said, I like the individuality of all the characters and the story has me wanting to see how this ends, so I will keep going.